Photographer's Note
This shot show up how the things are in real life. I know it is not soo beault, but real.
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paololg
(31448) 2012-01-10 8:11
Ciao dear Marcelo,
to capture good photos is never easy, but TE can be a good school, the important thing is to learn with humility and perseverance from who has more experience. It is not only a question of having a great camera or a good software for the PP, you must also understand where you're wrong and learn to correct the errors. We analyze this photo: the subject is interesting but the photos contains many errors. The light is completely wrong, with overexposed areas (the top) and underexposed areas (the middle). Completely lacks the sharpness and the color definition. The picture is distorted two degrees to the right and there are parts of the scene that have no meaning, like the white walls at the sides. The composition of the scene is very important to get a good picture, so the vertical lines. The presence of the cat is very important, because it gives life to the image. I tried to do a little WS to show what I wrote, even if it was not possible to improve perfectly your photo. I hope you like it. Continue to post, trying to correct the errors of the previous picture, and certainly you will become a good photographer. When you comment the photos of other photographers, not only see the errors, but also looks at the qualities! :-)
Two points of encouragement ;-)
Ciao, have a nice day!
Paolo
Photo Information
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Copyright: Marcelo Araujo de Oliveira (deOliveira)
(54)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2011-02-10
- Categories: Daily Life
- Exposure: f/2.8, 1/60 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2011-12-27 10:42