lane, a photo from Victoria, East

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Small lane with cafes, Melbourne.

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mlopes (494) 2006-03-16 8:49

Hi Rowan,
The high contrast is a little disturbing since you loose many details. This place looks like fun, but to be honest i would prefer a smoother B&W. Maybe Tri-x is too harsh for this kind of compos

jinju (14265) 2006-03-16 9:30

Id love to see this a bit darker as well Rowan. Seems to be blown out in places especially up there in the sky. The compo is good, fun place. Perhaps filling out the foreground with somebody would balance it out as well. Deserves a 2nd try Rowan.

AnimeshRay (9089) 2006-05-20 23:52

Another one with a very rich tonal range, in fact fabulous tonal range and brilliant detail. But I think you needed an old man, a young woman, or a black cat on the left side to balance the mass on the right side.