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Photographer's Note
Here is a shot taken at Semaphore Beach in Adelaide... I found this to be a very interesting reflection and decided to take a few snaps of it when it was nearing sunset :)
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david
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(3992) 2006-03-11 6:53
i like the idea of your shot allan, but honestly i think the execution is a little lacking. since the windows and reflection are your subject, you should crop out the foreground, especially the car front. cropping out the arials on the roof would be good too ... that way we can focus more on your idea and not have our attention distracted by unnecessary elements in the shot.
also, your image is 554px wide but you can have a maximum of 800px. please try to make your photos bigger so that viewers can appreciate the details.
this is a good effort and don't be put off by the criticism ... keep shooting!!!
DownUnder
(1177) 2006-03-11 6:55
Hello Alan, very nice shot, I would have liked the bottom, nose of the car, and the top, just where roof ends to be cropped.. warm colours and sharpness.. tfs
Alaettin
MKING
(3054) 2006-03-20 10:19
Hi Allan,
I agree with the others-- a tighter crop would have brought out the basic elements which drew you to take this photograph. Try scanning around the viewfinder/LCD before you shoot to see if there's anything you can crop out or remove by zooming or shifting your position.
