Photographer's Note
here is almost the same picture as yesterday, but this has the reflection of people. animesh suggested this would be better, what do you think?
"I'll be your mirror
Reflect what you are, in case you don't know
I'll be the wind, the rain and the sunset
The light on your door to show that you're home
When you think the night has seen your mind
That inside you're twisted and unkind
Let me stand to show that you are blind
Please put down your hands
'Cause I see you
I find it hard to believe you don't know
The beauty you are
But if you don't let me be your eyes
A hand in your darkness, so you won't be afraid
When you think the night has seen your mind
That inside you're twisted and unkind
Let me stand to show that you are blind
Please put down your hands
'Cause I see you
I'll be your mirror
(reflect what you are)"
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peter1892
(1681) 2006-05-09 17:19
I prefer this one, although they're both effective images. the reflection in this one tends to draw the viewer deeper into the shot, to see what's going on within the glass.
AnimeshRay
(9089) 2006-05-10 0:31
I agree with Peter. Certainly it is more thought-provoking. One problem is that the series of images has blended with the reflection. So the punch is a bit muted. But it is good. I suspect that the tonality can be adjusted to bring out the reflection a little more, but I am not sure I know how to do that. Perhaps other TEers would know better.
verde
(957) 2006-05-10 18:11
ya I like this one better. the angle allows for a better reflection on all the pictures.
I played with it in w/s to see if the refelctions could pop a little more and the tonality could be increased.
let me know what you think
b
mugush
(2104) 2006-07-10 4:53
nice work..it is betten than previous one,, i like your composition ..good different work though..
thanks for sharing
Love
Mugush
Photo Information
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Copyright: Jennifer Love (erthmuffin)
(1551)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Black & White
- Date Taken: 2006-04-18
- Categories: Artwork
- Camera: Canon PowerShot s230
- Exposure: f/2.8, 1/5 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2006-05-09 12:39
Discussions
- To peter1892: interesting (1)
by erthmuffin, last updated 2006-05-09 05:36 - To verde: ws (2)
by erthmuffin, last updated 2006-05-11 08:50