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Au centre de San Francisco. En attendant le gros TiP's.
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Pietrow
(424) 2013-06-28 5:29
Interesujace ale ...... zrobilem WS do tego.
pozdrawiam
Wojtek
rigoletto
(34279) 2013-06-28 6:08
hi elisabeth,
i liked pietrow's WS but looking at the original version i think i like your version better. a face with a strong character, you could also make a portrait of his face.
deniz
chanteuse
(210) 2013-06-28 7:26
This is wonderful, Elisabeth. I like your version best too. Seeing some of the context makes it more powerful and you've composed this beautifully - especially the angles of foot and fountain (?) and microphone.
emka
(152388) 2013-06-29 14:13
Witaj, Zainteresowałam sie tym Workshopem, ale zdecydowanie wole Twoją wersję. Po co ucinać facetowi i kolano, i stope, i nawet kapelusz? Potrzeby wiekszego kontrastu tez nie widzę. Ewentualnie bym przycięła lekko lewą strone, nie wiadomo co tam jest. I wole bez ramki. Ciekawy facet z warkoczykami i mikrofonem. Ale obawiam sie, ze na te wieksze napiwki to sie nie doczekal..
Pozdrawiam Małgorzata
kato
(11630) 2013-06-30 18:57
Hi Elisabeth,
You're capturing well this portrait by a good angle and excellent B/W tone/clarity, so it's interesting and impressive to see the old man who has made his living by the street musician minutely. He seems to be tired, this may be a low income group's reality which a newspaper never write.
Kind regards,
mikio
avigur_11
(22535) 2013-10-05 0:47
This is a wnderful shot, elisbeth, and I am really happy that you have chosed b/w for this pictures. I guess the the hugh tip box is a wishfull thinking..
Photo Information
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Copyright: Elisabeth Kofman (Kofman)
(2366)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Black & White
- Date Taken: 2009-12-18
- Categories: Daily Life
- Exposure: f/4, 1/50 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2013-06-28 0:43
Discussions
- To Pietrow: Merci (1)
by Kofman, last updated 2013-06-29 12:21 - To emka: Masz rację. (1)
by Kofman, last updated 2013-06-30 11:01