À San Francisco, a photo from California, West

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Au centre de San Francisco. En attendant le gros TiP's.

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Pietrow (424) 2013-06-28 5:29

Interesujace ale ...... zrobilem WS do tego.
pozdrawiam
Wojtek

rigoletto (34279) 2013-06-28 6:08

hi elisabeth,
i liked pietrow's WS but looking at the original version i think i like your version better. a face with a strong character, you could also make a portrait of his face.
deniz

chanteuse (210) 2013-06-28 7:26

This is wonderful, Elisabeth. I like your version best too. Seeing some of the context makes it more powerful and you've composed this beautifully - especially the angles of foot and fountain (?) and microphone.

emka (153620) 2013-06-29 14:13

Witaj, Zainteresowałam sie tym Workshopem, ale zdecydowanie wole Twoją wersję. Po co ucinać facetowi i kolano, i stope, i nawet kapelusz? Potrzeby wiekszego kontrastu tez nie widzę. Ewentualnie bym przycięła lekko lewą strone, nie wiadomo co tam jest. I wole bez ramki. Ciekawy facet z warkoczykami i mikrofonem. Ale obawiam sie, ze na te wieksze napiwki to sie nie doczekal..

Pozdrawiam Małgorzata

kato (11630) 2013-06-30 18:57

Hi Elisabeth,

You're capturing well this portrait by a good angle and excellent B/W tone/clarity, so it's interesting and impressive to see the old man who has made his living by the street musician minutely. He seems to be tired, this may be a low income group's reality which a newspaper never write.

Kind regards,
mikio

avigur_11 (22535) 2013-10-05 0:47

This is a wnderful shot, elisbeth, and I am really happy that you have chosed b/w for this pictures. I guess the the hugh tip box is a wishfull thinking..