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Ebbe
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(9625) 2003-12-30 14:52
Oh, the old dodge tool :) This is a good close up Ofir, I like the way it allmost builds up over me. Well done!
I think it can be concentrated by some cropping, I make a WS.
andyohare
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(437) 2003-12-30 15:31
Nice composition. I think it could have been improved by moving your viewpoint slightly to the right, ie align the hood ornament with the centre of the windscreen.
Photo Information
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Copyright: Ofir Avigur (ofir)
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(95) - Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2003-12-20
- Categories: Transportation
- Camera: PENTAX ESPIO 60S
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Theme(s): Old Cars, Automobile [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2003-12-30 14:20
Viewed: 1675
Points: 3
