The evolved Eye, a photo from Arbil, North

Photographer's Note

I agree
with Charles D. -
'Tis hard to see
how the eye evolved
continuously.

And why oh why
couldn't we have
a squid's eye?
(it's not so hot
to have a blind spot) .

Just think!
you could read
a poem that stinks
and not even blink.

Charles Audette

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Bruno40 (6658) 2007-04-25 4:12

The idea was good, but it is out of focus/blur. Maybe you cropped too much from an already small picture?
TFS
Jorge

vagabondtravels (6511) 2007-04-25 5:03

Hi Guluzar

Good idea but not very sharp. Maybe you could run noise ninja or something. Anyhow shoot it again, amazing potential.
Ben

sedaeristurk (457) 2007-04-25 5:07

Guluzar hanim yine cok degisik ve basarili bir calisma olmus.bence net olmamasi calismayi daha da ilginc kiliyor.tebrikler.seda

ssengonul (63) 2007-04-25 5:34

sevgili gulizar üzgünüm, ADANA kebabını gördüğün için halbuki gece geç saatte yükledim kimse görmesin canı istemesin diye, ama söz istanbula gelirseniz size kebap borcum olsun, umarım o gece aç yatmamışsınızdır, çok üzüldüm. KALIN SAĞLICAKLA. Napıyım bende çok severim yemeden önce çekeyim dedim. İlerde canım isterse bakarım diye.)))))

polter (7239) 2007-04-27 17:48 [Comment]

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vizion (729) 2007-04-27 19:16 [Comment]

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sevman13 (553) 2007-04-28 12:25

selam,

rezolüsyon ile ilgili soruna katılıyorum. ancak çok zekice düşünülüp gayet güzel bir şiir ile sunulmuş bu resminizi ben şahsen beğendim, netkil olmasa bile. gözdeki fluluk bile düşünülürse anlanmıdır....
sevgiler
SErdar

ls7902 (7380) 2007-04-29 13:49

Hello Guluzar,
A mysterious photo. More mystery added with the blur. A good crop but unfortunately the quality is effected. I'm beginning to wonder what you do. First a mysterious lady in Afghanistan, now Iraq. Both have strong & troubling emotional impact, and made more effective with poetry. I like them for being out of the ordinary. Regards. Latiff.

feather (51130) 2007-05-01 11:24

The way you have composed this and cropped tightly is very good. The folds on the top of her head are well lit. It has already been mentioned about the quality. I think the main reason is the file size which is only 33kb, a sixth of what is allowed. Even the 200kb allowed is a small file so this is over-compressed for the dimensions. You have an excellent eye for a good photo, but you need to use less compression when you save.
Kath

bebep (2089) 2007-05-02 12:42

What a fantastic shot Guluzar, even if is cropped from a greater photo, this is a pic that doesn't forget, very good

Greetings

Giuseppe

pvinagre (202) 2007-05-02 15:21

Well cropped - but no definition - too much blur. The I dea is great - heavy sensation of the eyes peaking out of all the black """imposition"""
Maybe try to take out the blur??

rushfan2112 (2965) 2007-05-03 15:10

Excellent abstract shot. Great composition and presentation. Obviously a huge crop but a very powerful image. Regards. Paul.

Wahclellaspirit (4125) 2007-05-04 20:41

Hello Guluzar,
Very beautiful eyes of this woman, the eyes offer life where life is hard to comprehend.
Well done,
Steve

guillaumejm (0) 2007-05-06 13:44 [Comment]

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erel (11890) 2007-05-08 13:06

merhaba
Flu olmasl bence enteresan olmuş .tebrikler.
EREL

claire526 (1267) 2007-05-12 1:03

Hello Guluzan,
Nice idea and composition here, simple yet effective framing. I like your note also. It's just a bit soft but it adds a touch of mystery.
Cheers,
Claire

sabanozturk (27) 2007-05-12 17:37

küçültün gitsin...

mehmetemin (7231) 2007-05-16 5:39

Guluzar hanim
Guzel bir paylasim.
Eline saglik.

mugush (2104) 2007-05-19 10:38

Wonderfull.............
i dont wanna say much
simply PERFECT
thanks for sharing
love
mugush

batalay (41261) 2007-05-30 2:05

A powerful photo, Guluzar. It makes an eloquent social statement. Of course, it would be better to have a sharper photo, but there is enough redeeming grace in this image to overcome the negative.
Warm regards,
Bulent

erhan1958 (15961) 2007-07-19 4:35

selam
Wonderfull fotograph
i don't wanna say much
realy very PERFECT
best regards
love
erhan

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nivaldo (15417) 2007-07-20 17:06

Yes, out of focus, yes, but it shows a real strong symbol, anyway...anyhow...
TFS,
Brazilian greetings,
Nivaldo

arvinnino (438) 2007-07-26 10:53

good croping but the quality of photo was not that sharp!! good job anyway!!

German74 (777) 2007-08-02 11:45

Muy buen trabajo,la idea está genial!!! es una de esas fotos tan extrañas, que uno se pregunta, si es buena o mala... le resta la falta de definición, pero al mismo tiempo la foto es impactante, los ojos no dejan de tener un aire misterioso!!!!

En mi opinión es excelente...

Kenny10pin (19301) 2007-08-16 3:05

nice shot, I liek the blur too here, good one

cfreire (11741) 2007-08-31 13:16

Wonderful portrait and good POV. Well seen, well done.
Regards,
Consuelo

mikeo (12129) 2007-08-31 13:37

Hello
If the photo was sharp - I would simply love it...
Unfortunately this poor quality is destroying these feelings:(

Greetings
A.

gunergok (2334) 2007-09-03 3:19

sana burada rastlamak cok guzel. profiline bakinca bu bizim tomurcuk degil mi dedim. yillar sonra tekrar senden haber almak guzel. istanbu'dan selamlar
ozcan

Benedict (7076) 2007-09-25 22:20

i wished it were sharp!
benedict

Sureyya (358) 2007-10-25 16:59

Merhaba Gülüzar,
Netlik çok kötü, biraz daha küçültmeyi dene istersen.

Selamlar.
Süreyya

ecoli1946 (259) 2007-11-09 12:33

Bonjour Guluzar,
Bonne idée et belle composition.
Mais, pour que la photo soit un succès, à mon point de vue, il faut que les yeux soient au foyer...
Désolé, Réjean

Island (654) 2008-06-17 10:33