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BUNCH OF FLOWERS
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smarcell
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(19965) 2007-08-09 2:25
Dear Mohammad, I like the idea and the composition, but I have some comments. First most flowers are a bit out of focurs. You needed more depth of field, closing more than f5.6.
Many the light was scarse. Second, I think it is a bit too much oversaturated. I don't' know if you have worked with Photoshop or whatever, but the colors look a bit too unreal.
Cheers Stefano
lorenzetti
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(1584) 2007-08-09 5:12
Hello Mohammed,
Good composition and beautiful colors. Could be sharper by having the subject parallel to the camera and by using F/11 or more.
Regards - Franco
Photo Information
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Copyright: MOHAMMED TITA (Tita)
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(218) - Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-07-14
- Categories: Nature
- Camera: Canon EOS 300D
- Exposure: f/5.6, 1/60 seconds
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- Photo Version: Original Version
- Theme(s): 2 colours [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2007-08-09 2:15
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Points: 4
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by Tita, last updated 2007-08-23 02:08
