Arcade, a photo from Timis, West

Photographer's Note

This was an ruin of an old building. A big part of this building colapsed. This was the remainings of a beautiful ballroom.

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dawekato (2269) 2004-06-15 11:38

Good composition and colours in the record of this building. I like the arches within arches. Could be a bit sharper to show up the wall textures. Also, there are a lot of opportunities here to create strong graphic images and close-ups of the textures.

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pamastro (7296) 2004-06-16 1:35

Nice capture. All the arches are great. All flow smoothly. The eye can go back nicely. Perhaps the DOF is too shallow, though. There are some great textures in this photo, many of them in the blurred background. However as it is it really makes this stand out and adds a feel of greater distance to these arches in the back. Very nicely composed.

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joso (2417) 2004-10-17 2:34

Valentin, I'm sure there are good possibilities for a good shot. But this one...
IMO very confuse, neither the foreground, nor the background is sharp enough - or blurred enough.
One side too bright, the other one too dark.
A lot of lines and curves, but none of them is realy outstanding, where I could start or end.
A tighter cropping, more sharpness - agree with Èva's WS, it makes it clearer.

Sorry for the not so happy smiley...

Steft (6109) 2004-11-28 19:41

Great subject, nice picture. But it's a shame that it isn't sharper.