Afternoon walk, a photo from Lubelskie, East

Photographer's Note

Yesterday, in the early afternoon. Excellent weather conditions and warmth- eventually something what we can call the Spring's bloom.
In the photo you can see Labunka river (the river over which Zamosc is located) with paths and benches along both shores and garden plots on the West side. Nice, quiet and peaceful place, excellent for a walk or having rest in the open air.

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gp_pl (1394) 2006-05-10 12:37

Czesc Damian
Kompozycja wydaje sie byc ok, ale ta gruba ramka przytlacza cale zdjecie.
pozdrawiam
Grzesiek

plimrn (21344) 2006-05-10 13:01

Hi Damien,
I like the faint sepia tones in this compo, often I think sepia is overdone. I like the framing of the curve of the canal repeating in the path, I might have cropped at the bend of the short-cut to emphasize this relationship. I also like the nice detail of the trees on both sides of the canal.
Regards, Pat

fijiphil (1355) 2006-05-10 14:13

I like your composition very much, although I detect a faint lean to the left that would be better corrected. Also I would like to see the figure on the bench play a more prominent role. And yes, not sure either about the sepia treatment. Great effort though.

Henryk_Bilor (20803) 2006-05-11 13:37

Jak nie jak tak? :D
B&W i o to chodzi. Piêkny przekaz miejsca w popo³udniowych godzinach. W ka¿dym razie mi³o popatrzeæ :).
Pozdrawiam

elmec (12210) 2006-05-12 14:01

Witaj Damianie!
Wiosna w B&W!
Mnie siê skojarzy³a z fotkami z mojego dzieciñstwa, które choæ rzekomo kolorowe, to jednak nie kipia³y nadmiernie kolorem.
Ciekawa praca!
Pozdrawiam serdecznie!

onmax (849) 2006-05-13 17:33