Photographer's Note
These Cuban students are enjoying each others company while sitting on the Malecon after school.
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worldcitizen
(15988) 2011-07-31 12:52
Hello Yvette,
Welcome to TE! I like your focus on the students, while still showing us a soft glimpse of the city buildings in the distance. Your placement of the students on the left side of the frame is also great. There is one small thing I would correct: there is a slight tilt to the left. Rotating the image a degree or two to the right would strengthen the overall presentation. Still, it is a very attractive photo. :-)
frunchy
(1800) 2011-08-01 23:18
Hi Evie,
nice photo, nice atmosphere. I made a workshop of it, emphasizing a bit the people in the image, hope you like it.
Regards, F.
bantonbuju
(51815) 2011-08-07 7:15
mALECON,
the very place to be at... the place which resisted strongest storms and is still there to "protect" old habana...
i remember being there late in the night last march... unforgettable experience...
best wishes
j.
ps. this one i like most out of all six you posted... i think - you've been to wonderful places - china and cuba (both of them i visited this year)... it's just that you need to "produce" more interesting photographs... this one just perfectly conveys the mood of the place...
pajaran
(115089) 2019-08-02 3:27 [Comment]
Photo Information
- Copyright: Yvette Gillespie (EvieG) (21)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2011-06-20
- Categories: Daily Life
- Exposure: f/9.0, 1/500 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2011-07-31 10:36