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Bridge in Osaka, Japan.
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MIG13
(0) 2006-02-18 13:23
Hola, David! Me gusta mucho esta foto, por la perspectiva y los reflejos! Quizás algunos cambios en los colores yo intentaría, así como en la nivelación. Saludos! Miguel.
dokufoto
(419) 2006-02-18 14:01
Beautiful composition and the crossing bridge makes a nice effect. Very bright and sharp photo.
joseelias
(0) 2006-02-22 9:26
Interesting composition. I particularly like the strong geometry which dominates the composition as there aren’t strong organic elements in it. Also like the warm tones which make the image more appealing as modern architecture is somewhat “cold”.
Still, I think that some things could be made to turn this image more appealing. One is the perspective distortion, especially in the right side. It could be a good idea to correct it as it creates the feeling that the photo is falling to the left side. Another idea, more creative, would be to enhance this distortion in the left and right side so we would get the feeling of very tall buildings.
Some more sharpness would also be good as it would make the details pop-up.
Photo Information
- Copyright: David Fernandez de Aguirre (davicin) (166)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2005-11-24
- Categories: Architecture
- Camera: Nikon D50, Nikkor 18-55 DX
- Exposure: f/4, 1/90 seconds
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2006-02-18 12:56
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- To joseelias: thanks (2)
by davicin, last updated 2006-02-22 11:33