couple!?, a photo from Jawa Tengah, Java

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A scene at the refugee camp.
(PS cross process)

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s10001in (0) 2006-06-08 20:35 [Comment]

Jeronimo (1382) 2006-06-08 20:39

It's an incredible shoot Yudo, I love your work on this type of antropological and reporter photo. Well done: you have an exelent DOF an POV...

dvlazar (6662) 2006-06-08 20:52

Looks like 2 shots stiched together? The mans shirt is cut off and the red line around his face a little strange. If you could mask that more this shot would be a winner!!
Dave

poulinp (4530) 2006-06-08 22:27

I love this portrait. Everything seems perfect for me: the crop, the light, the DOF...excellent!
(However, I agree with dvlazar...there is some strange things there...)

DarkoG (8) 2006-06-09 2:20

Nice study. Good use of DOF.

To me a little bit too much contrast. Wish you leave some space left of women.

Regards Darko

jussipee (10) 2006-06-09 8:29

Hello Yudo
He is smoking so hard, maybe he is little bit angry for background lady, who is brushing up her hair?
Moment looks like right, and of course, it can be upside down at next slide.
Fine picture.
Regards
Jussi

Brian (3) 2007-06-06 18:58

Hi Yudo,

I like your DoF a lot. The faces both looking in the same direction catches my eye. I thought that it was a bit too bright & saturated. I did a workshop for you if don't mind.

-Brian

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Photo Information

Copyright: yudo wahyu (wahyoo) (163)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04-29
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: view
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): activity on the refugees camp of Merapi, Refugees [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-06-08 20:33