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a woman and her baby on the edge of the niger river
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IlanaK (307) 2005-05-28 8:40 [Comment]
Michael
(277) 2005-05-28 8:57
Nice colors and good control of the DOF. Not so easy for this young woman to work like this with her baby on her back !
TFS
Michael.
oochappan
(4880) 2005-05-28 10:20
Hi Laetitia
What a smooth impression of this capture very well to get the mood with the excellent balanced colors and the pleasant compo with the curled map in front and a good DOF on the background.
this shot radiates sweet mother love indeed
Very well done
Greetings
Henk
faubry
(35447) 2005-05-28 11:23
très belle image encore!! bravo pour les couleurs, j'aime bien le panier au premier plan, dommage que le bb ne regadre pas vers nous.. merci francine
srabbe
(1424) 2005-05-28 15:51
Bonsoir Laetitia,
Superbes couleurs, c'est ce qui m'a attiré vers cette image. La netteté et la pdf sont excellentes.
Dommage qu'on ne voit pas le visage de la femme.
Sophie
gaby
(19819) 2005-05-29 5:53
Hi Laetitia - très belle composition avec de très jolies couleurs -
Bon dimanche
Gaby
kinginexile
(2598) 2005-06-01 5:31
Hi, Laetitia,
Again kudos to you for trying compositions with different elements that are not easy to handle as a whole. We probably are begging to give a sense of relation between the rolled mat and the woman, not obvious to see, maybe she pushes it on a carriage. It is a strong shape in eth foreground, just too big to leave it alone as is, IMO. If that little face on her back had been turning towards you/us, it would also enrich the image. Much appreciating this effort from you, as you never forget the human element, and still struggle with shapes and their relations, or even definition into a composition.
Félicitations pour ce nouvel essai sur une compo aux élèments/plans difficiles a gérer. Etant un grand objet au premier plan, on manque peut-être un peu de savoir ce qu'il y fait, est-ce dans un chariot qu'elle pousse?
Pour combattre en quelque sorte cet objet passif mais complexe de forme (rouleau intriqué) dans la compo, la petite tête tournée vers toi/nous du bebe aurait aidé, je pense. Un bon essai de travail photographique de toute façon, Laetitia, merci.
Photo Information
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Copyright: laetitia dupin (bullabulla)
(3488)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2005-01-00
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Canon EOS 300V
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Theme(s): mother's children, BabyWearing [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2005-05-28 8:34
Discussions
- To kinginexile: Merci Hervé (2)
by bullabulla, last updated 2005-06-02 11:03 - To MiKa2000: merci Mikael!! (1)
by bullabulla, last updated 2005-06-03 11:13