bobolais child, a photo from Hauts-Bassins, West

Photographer's Note

"bobolais" is the name of the residents of Bobo Dioulasso city in south of Burkina Faso. This photo was taken in district 6 in the backward of sanou

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VeeJayCee (2410) 2006-11-19 13:11

I like the unusual crop used here to show the children as main subjects and include some of their surroundings at the same time eliminating a great deal of blank sky. I think perhaps a little more contrast would "boost" the image.

gabrielpat (7163) 2006-11-19 17:34

bel alignement naturel de ces gosses contre le mur,l'autre gamin qui semble regarder ce qui se passe est bien positionné.
Un peu plus de contraste peut être pour atténuer la dominante grise?
joli cadrage.

smash2707 (3320) 2006-11-19 21:03

I love the horizontal composition and the frame you chose. I think increasing contrast a bit would make it even more impacting. Welcome, Yvonne

SylFondacci (4087) 2006-11-24 16:15