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rgarrigus (0) 2008-11-25 11:19

Hi Christophe,

So I've looked at this one a few times now. It is well exposed and the focus is perfect. The colors and contrast are realistic. The composition shows plenty of depth as well which is something I always enjoy. Still, I find myself unsure as to why you wanted to make this image. Nothing clearly comes across in the composition as to a main subject. I wonder if excluding the sky and getting even closer to the rocks to really bring out the textures would have worked better. Or, making that small bush toward the mid-ground a more prominent part of the image might have made for a more compelling composition. I guess all told this one is technically fine but feels like emotionally you were just going through the motions. Does that make sense? I hope you are not offended. I didn't want to be the 37th person to view this and move on without providing feedback and I only mean respectful honesty in my critique.

Cheers!

Bob G.