tcht 2006-01-08 7:57
hello David,
A great attempt to shoot this beautiful place. The lamp at the foreground adds to the nice perspective of your picture.
However, given the camera and tripod you've got the Miyajima 'gate' should be way sharper. Also it is quite messy that you've left a bit of ground on the bottom left of picture. Cropping / including more land would help.
By the way, Welcome to TE!!
Also I advice you to always put some notes, at least 4-5 lines length that adds some info to picture and so that we know what the photo's about.
Another advice is to try and critique other people's photographs whether you like it or not. This benefits both you and other members.
Take care,
Cheukhin Tsang
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01-08-2006, 03:12 PM
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To ozaydin: tessekkurler
Thank you. I really like to take photos of eldely people. They have so much character in their faces.
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