sdnpicz 2013-08-31 10:02
Hello Alekhya,
With a PnS camera its quite clear and detailed portrait with well out of focus background.
It may be a good frame for it but I think framing could have been better. Keeping more blank space on left. And also half part of moustache in the picture. Its like incompleteness. You could have kept it whole in the photo.
and a question. Friend did you bring your camera closer to the subject too? Or Zoomed in only?
I tried a workshop with this photograph. Hope you allow me to do a workshop with it.
All the best.
Have a nice Sunday. :)
PS. I'm not senior :P
Best regards,
Shadan
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09-01-2013, 01:42 PM
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To sdnpicz: Thank you
Hello Shadan,
Thank you for the workshop. I see it looks more “complete” now. In fact, while framing, I was in a dilemma whether to include the lips or to extend it upto the chin. Only one thing I had decided… no head-- there is no drama (I mean hair) there! Though I was not far from the subject, yes, it was zoomed. The focal length is 72mm (i.e., 115.2 in 35). I am 6 days old in TE. Thanks again, senior…  With warm regards, Alekhya 
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09-02-2013, 06:04 AM
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You are welcome!
Hi Alekhya, Good morning.
You are welcome. Hmmmm...you were thinking right. Just half moustache in the picture was like unwanted (perhaps).I'm not senior buddy, just a beginner. Learning from wherever I can. Have a nice day ahead. Kind regards, Shadan
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